Greta's Persuasive writing

In room 11 we have started to do Persuasive writing show what we agree on. we had to mark ourselves then mr billings this is my one.

Should schools offer fast food options like McDonald’s or Pizza Hut?

planning:

What's the first thing you think about when someone says fast food while you might think frozen coke or maybe burgers but do you think that's the healthiest option? No , here's two words when I think of frozen coke and burgers, SUGAR and SALT.

Kids, why would you ever think of giving a child a fat filled lunch from mcdonald's instead of a homemade sandwich that's filled with ham, cheese, tomato, lettuce and homemade sauce to top it off.

What's in fast food that's so unhealthy

Oil is used to deep fry and fry chips and meat.

Sugar is in frozen coke, mcfluffers, ice cream, soft drinks the list goes on.

FAST FOODS FOR SCHOOLS NO WAY!!!

By Greta